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title battles title battles

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good

Yeh, i liked it. Liked the pointlessness and use of sprites. Future movies need to use more special effects and be a bit more meaningful (storyline etc.) and longer. Also, the file's huge for what it is, i suggest sound compression...
Finally, one edit, the ending music doesn't stop when u replay the movie, creating a sound overlap.



Super Mario bros Z ep 6 Super Mario bros Z ep 6

Rated 5 / 5 stars

My heart stopped...

Man, you have GOT to make the next episode soon. I spent all morning watching the series and i'm still thirsting for more! This series is by far one of the best submissions ever on NG.
Just one question...is it wrong to think that Mecha Sonic is in fact the coolest character? Maybe i'm just a fan of power-hungry maniacs.


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MageStory-Intro MageStory-Intro

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice

Good animation. like the graphics and the insane chaos. one thing to improve, the cloud loop is preety jerky, and it looks like the little creature just appears in the eagle's claws. overall a decent movie. keep it up!



Timeline Rhapsody Timeline Rhapsody

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Helping hand

Not a bad flash. graphics were decent enough and i understand the whole time restriction thing. better than any of my school projects at least.
want some tips on how to tweak it? firstly the preloader bar is broken because the code is wrong, ur using width in pixels not percentage. use the newgrounds loader and just change the art, much easier.
Second, about a replay button. on the last frame, add a layer and put the code "stop();" in the actions box for that frame. then make a button on that frame (design it, select it, then press F8 and click "button") go to properties panel (righthand side) click the "plus" sign, then go to "movie control" or something like that and select "gotoAndPlay" then click ok. oh and finally, in the last frame, tell the music to stop (drop down box at bottom of screen) otherwise it wont sync.
check NGs tutorials or message my account if u have any problems.
sorry to bore u fellow reviewers but maybe it'll improve the next flash!
keep it up mate